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Congratulations on the start of your Visual novel journey. 

I just finished the current build and this has caught my attention straight away, I enjoy the  futuristic setting setting.  alot of detail have been put into the artwork, characters and background with the inclusion of a few illustrations already something not seen in early VNs.

The whole Big corporation taking over is a bit chliche but you might have a spin on it to make it stand out more.

I understand that is is still very early days and things may change, for a romantic VN  there is not much of a choice  so far it seems to be more directed to Oswald " nothing to complain about" but i would like to see some more  dialog choices to toward the other love interests to which i can only assume are Dylan and Max. allowing us to immerse ourselves even further into the story. 

Keep up the amazing work, consider making a Pateron Page and i will happy to support this  Project 

Thank you for the Replying, DyneWulf  once i became a Patron, i found the answers too this questions in the FAQ, so my apologies for asking,

thanks for the repose again i am looking forward too seeing what comes from you. you have been able too create characters that i care for and input many emotions so that is amazing work, i even rant  too my mate about the story and the characters .  

I do have one small dislike towards the current gameplay atm, (understanding it is still a work in progress so my apologies if you find this in bad taste)  I find it a shame that once you have chosen a route with a certain charter you are unable too get out it and explore a different route , for example i have a huge dislike to the Darius ( i don't like his personality) that is my personal taste and I can see that others out there like him however i would like liked to stop his route and try with a  different route, for example Spencer i thought it would of been a great oppunity that Mc and Spencer could express there feeling for one another and go into Spencers route kinda similar too how it was in Spencers original route  , but even when i Expressed that i did not have feeling for him the game play continued on making it out that i did,  My thoughts would be if you could please incorporate a way too end a route midway and start a new one,. not knowing about how its coded  not sure if that would be possible so late in development but just something i thought just took away from the whole experience, 

but please don't get me wrong I'm a huge fan of the game/ VN and your writing,  so well done, i am looking forward too seeing more and can't wait until the game is finished. 

Thank You,

Ian 

Thank you, :)

Hello, i downloaded this game Two Days ago and i have spent a lot of my time working though this Novel, two days and i have completed the Harold and Spencer route, (well up too what has been finished so far) i am really enjoying working my way though although i have a huge dislike with the story just cutting out mid way haha i have to know what is happening and i dislike being left on a cliff hanger so too speak, but i have become so obsessed in what is going to happen, i have become a Patron so so i will be able to find out what has happened, so well done in capturing my interest. 

although i do have a Question, with the updates coming though, how will the applied? will that be automatic or will i need to download? i need answering to the story haha. Amazing work i am looking toward too seeing more.